“Yes!!”yelled Sam, Sam was a normal boy who liked video games. Sams favourite game was Space-Rae,Space-Rae was a game where you have to kill space monsters.Sam was pro at Space-Rae. Then one day Sam was playing Space- Rae then he got suck in the game! Sam saw in the game, with his friends,James and Charlie, but none of them could speak. Then a bunch of armour spawned. They were all confused. Then a monster sporned and Sam and his friends had to kill it. But now they can speak. But they didn’t know. They couldn’t kill it. “ next time I will win” said Sam
Hello Tash,
Finding yourself stuck in a video game with your friends is an interesting story idea. Spawning monsters and struggling for survival opens up many possible adventures in a world where anything can happen. Well done.
I first saw this idea in a 1982 film where a programmer (what we are now more likely to call a coder) found himself in the game he created. It was the PG rated “Tron”.
Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia
Lots going on in your story, Tash. I like the way you mix reality with a video game. I am glad that Sam’s friends were able to speak in the end, but did they ever get out of the game I wonder?