Mark John, served in world war 2. Mark had a very inserting story. He was like every other solider. But he was so different in many ways. Mark was young ,he was 19. He lived a normal life like every one else did. But what makes him different would blow your mined. If Mark saw some one hurt , on his team or not he would help them. People believe that one of his most famous quotes was “ I don’t fight because I hate the people in-front of me because I love the people be-hide me” that is why he has a famous statue.
This is a creative response to the challenge and what an interesting character you have created. I think a story is always better when it has some kind of message, so well done.